She
peels back her skin
for me,
baring the ripe, pale flesh,
releasing her sweet scent,
teasing my senses,
daring me to look,
to touch.
Naive little fruit!
I want so much more than to simply
look.
I wonder:
Does it hurt to be devoured?
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I think so...
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Ah, don't we all have those little quirks that involve fruit...
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lol i didnt realize it was about a banana. i thought it was about a fantasy or something. lol. then i read the last line and looked back at the title and realized it is about a banana! maybe? is it really literal?
i thought this was cute
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It was inspired by a banana I was eating on my lunch break as well as my recent experiments in bi-sexuality. But really, it has about 3 layers. There's a third one, much deeper and more personal than a piece of fruit or a romp in the sack.
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aha so i was partially right. i thought it was about a girl.... buuut i didnt want to write that straight out because i wasnt sure
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