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An Angel She Is

An Angel She Is

 

 

She looked at me
and smiled that smile,
you know the one,
it's contageous
with her sparkling eyes.

 

 

I smile too,
how could I not,
for hers glows
and fills her face
with an angelic glow.

 

 

My sister,
that's who she is,
Debilynn-most call her,
but she's my sis,
how beautiful
and precious
her lovely heart.

 

 

A prayer you need,
oh, yes, just ask,
it's one of her
specialties;
like having a phone
that goes right up
to God.

 

 

An angel she is,
I'm sure that's a halo
above her beautiful head,
glowing that Heavenly glow
for all to see,
the warmth radiating
from her perfect smile.

 

 

Debilynn, I love you, Sis.  My prayers are with you.

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  • Sweet Jane
    May 12, 2007

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    Oh so lovlly

    Oh grandma this poem is beautiful.
    I am so glad I'm bach on line, I will write poems very soon. Arizona is gorgeous wonderful and lovlly play to live bot it is so so so so hot bot I love it.
    Love your AP grandaughter Meagan(Sweet Jane)


  • Truthful Princess
    May 2, 2007
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    Awe

    This is so sweet mom! Oh and by the way your grand daughter is lovely!


  • goddesskevauna
    May 1, 2007

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    Oh, how beautiful! Very sweet and loving words. Somebody is truly loved here! Always sweet to express that love for someone that close to you.


  • perdisbeaute
    April 26, 2007

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    This is such a sweet poem. It reminds me of my sister, she's such an angel and she doesn't realize it. Wonderful write!

    Michelle


  • paullallady silver member
    April 26, 2007

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    What a beautiful poem for a most wonderful lady. I know that this must have brought tears to her eyes, for it captures her beauty and soul perfectly. Great job with this one Sis.


  • jasminerose
    April 26, 2007

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    Hi Patricia
    This will surely bring a smile to her heart and lift her spirits in her time of need! A beautiful heartfelt poem expressing all the admiration and love you hold in your heart for her!
    Beautiful poem my friend!!
    Linda


    • pattyann4500
      April 26, 2007
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      Thank you, Linda. Debilynn truly is a lovely angel. Hugs, Patricia


  • Sherry gold member
    April 26, 2007
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    Patty, Another beautifully written piece. Filled with compassion and caring love. Love,Mom


    • pattyann4500
      April 26, 2007
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      Thank you, Mom. It's so nice to see you more often. You make my day. Love, Patricia


  • MargaretG
    April 26, 2007

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    Your love and gratitude are plain, this is a very encouraging poem. Even angels need support sometimes. Well done!


    • pattyann4500
      April 26, 2007
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      Yes, I suppose Angels do need support at time, Margaret. You should certainly know, Dear Angel. Thank you for your lovely comment. Hugs, Patricia


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    April 25, 2007

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    What a beautifully sweet write for a beautifully sweet lady
    You captured her very essence, you did!
    All the very best to you; this is such a pretty write!


    • pattyann4500
      April 26, 2007
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      Thanks, Sweetie. Yes, Debilynn is truly an angel, and a better poet should have come in to help me write this one better. Hugs, Patricia


  • debilynn gold member
    April 25, 2007

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    gee i really got you fooled dont i? just kidding! thank you for this so much. it means a lot especially coming from you. keep writing. God bless you always


    • pattyann4500
      April 26, 2007
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      No, Sis, no fool here. I've seen your hand go out to me and to others many times. I stand by every word. Love and Hugs, Patricia


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 25, 2007

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    Oh, this so so loving and poignant to read. I'm sure this will brighten Debilynn's day. Thank you so much for your entry!




    • pattyann4500
      April 26, 2007
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      Thank you. I've been truly blessed to get to know Debilynn and to share chats with her. She has put her gentle hand out for me a couple of time. How could I not reciprocate.

      Thanks for holding this lovely contest for this beautiful angel. Hugs, Patricia

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