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Marc plz i love you

Secretly i've held each one of
my lies within each of your golden
brown eyes.This is more than what it
appears to be.Outside i may seem
happy, i'll smile and giggle but
inside i'm torn apart and i'm dying.

He told me he loved and so I
believed him and took his words
and memorized them.But then i saw him
hanging with his sheets rapped tightly
around his neck.His face was in shook,but
smiling,his eyes were huge and yet his face was completely pale.

 

I cry'd and thought is this love or is it hate

he said he'd always be mine but now he's

not he's the grounds.What can i do but cry all

day.? Who can i be held by or hold for

warmth and comfort but my teddy bear.

Who well i be able to tell my secrets to and trust

them not to tell anyone else but my dairy.Where

will i run when my mom and i have a fight and

i try to run away?I have no choice but to try and

move on. but it's so hard to leave you just in the

past where i know you belong.

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  • HisDarlingDisaster
    May 11, 2007

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    aww...

    Oh my gosh. I really really like this. Its so awsome and sad. I cried a little. Its amazing. Thanks so much for entering my contest. The best of luck to you!!
    <3
    Jessika AKA XxtearsofblackxX
    x_x


  • Xsafety glassX
    April 29, 2007

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    if u used enter wen it rhymed it would be alot easier to read...but anyho, this wuz rlly cool...u got finalists


  • XxMysticalFantasyxX
    April 27, 2007

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    This is a really great poem you are very talented and this was very well done I enjoyed reading it..It was sooo powerfull and I really think you are a great poet!!!


  • whipped rose
    April 26, 2007

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    DQ

    I am terribly sorry, you are DISQUALIFIED
    The rules state
    NO SUICIDE... this poem is wholly about suicide.
    Please re-enter a dark poem, before the closing date
    Thank you


  • Haunted Doll
    April 26, 2007

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    "Secretly i've held each one of
    my lies within each of your golden
    brown eyes" these opening lines were unique and breathtaking. the best part in my opinion.

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