With each year that passes by
I look at you with awe
Your loving smile, your gentle ways
Just makes me love you more
Expressive eyes, cheeky grin
Warm wet lips on wanton skin
I choose with you to spend my life
Three years now, as man and wife
We walk through life together
We face things hand in hand
Fights we've had, words we've said
When things dont go as planned
But your still my partner
My lover, and my friend
You'r the stars, in the sky
The heat, the sun does send
Our two souls are one my love
As it's been right from the start
You are the air that i breathe
And, your my beating heart
You'r my world, and you'r my life
Forever with you Man and Wife
I Love You.
A contest entry
- My wedding anniversary by Myjoy.
525 points, ended May 7, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre Written Rhyme by piccola.
900 points, ended February 5, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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aww. What a great tribute to someone you love. You have honored her well. Thank you for the entry
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Thankyou verymuch for your kind comment
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Precious!!
Oh This is Precious
Love the message You sent and the emotion that
flowed through Your words!
Beautifully done!!
Can feel the Love
Thank You for sharing this Gift
Best wishes to You in the contest!
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Your always so kind thankyou.
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Ahhhhhhh so sweet and heart felt. I like this poem because it seem so real. Wonderful expressions of emotions well done.
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Simply Incredible
Awww, this was the kind of beautiful heart felt poem that melts the heart. So very touching. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
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thankyou so much for your wonderful comment.
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Oh my god... that is just so beautiful... a lot of emotions of a true love and how it should be... well done and i wish you lots of luck in your contest
cheers
Jen
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hello there good to see you again, thankyou so much for your wonderful comment.
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