What can one say
To a parent that has lost a child
Truly a tragedy
A
Very deep loss
Death feels like the End
But
It isn't
For we do not know
What
The Lord has planned
All we can do
Is
To take one day at a time
Be
Thankful for the time we had
Rejoice in the love we shared
Trust in what you believe
Find peace
Remember
The sparkle in their eye
Your love is forever
This love will live on
Death cannot break this Love
Nothing can
but
.....YOU.....
Vickie Bajor AKA Ebaby
April 25,2007
A contest entry
- He Took his Own Life! Please... comfort poems needed... by Periwinkle Blue.
475 points, ended May 1, 2007, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Vuckie Bajor, this is a very good write. I like the depths and the maturity of this sincere write. I think you did a wonderful job. Truly amazing, keep up the great work and thank you for sharing
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Thank you Mr Mack for reading and such a nice comment on this poem, Life is good!
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Very poignantly and sensitively written for a family who faces the deepest of heartache. Congrats on your gold.
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It's unthinkable to contemplate the death of a child, but I hope the family finds some comfort in your words. As long as we live and remember, they live.
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Oh, thank you so much!
What beautiful thoughts, penned so well and giving so much comfort! 
A really lovely poem and we thank you for sharing your talent for our comfort contest.
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Wonderful
Can I say wonderful . . about something so tragic . .
In this life we are all in transit . . . to we know not where . .
No doubt at times God needs us to be somewhere else . .
And we depart dependant on his schedule not ours
Leaving us to mourn the empty shell . . of who or what we loved . . in our earthly way
A Buddhist Monk in Thailand once told me that grieving is simply to console the living . . the dearly departed have a far more important agenda.
Albert.
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I agree totally with this buddhist monk.
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Thank you agazeley, such a great comment you have left me, and the info from the Buddhist Monk is so interesting....... and I know he is right!
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Thank you so much for your kind and heartwarming words of comfort. I am certain my cousin is at peace now. Thanks again for entering, good luck, and God Bless.
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Beautiful, and comforting! Great job of conforting one by putting them in Gods arms! "Thankful for the time we had Rejoice in the love we shared" Key point verse for me!
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very nicely said. I really liked this poem. words of true comfort indeed.
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it = good
i like you message. its sad. death isnt the end. your awesome. and thx for the comment
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Thank you Logansitz, it is so sad...... so many people hurt so bad when death parts their family parents are not to bury their children. Thanks for reading.
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