If love should make me blind
Break my heart till my eyes open wide
If love should make me weak
Give me the strength to stand behind you lovingly
If love should take my life
Then kill me soon, so that I do not have to cry
Why oh why
Please just let me die…
Author notes
this is by my friend caleb...he wrote to collaborate with "what i think you think(for raven)"...he's also a good artist too...he's who i wrote [no title yet] for...
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Comments
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admirable talent, here, kind poet! exceptional poem with fine images that spark out the story in clever ways. stirring and uplifting, this poem makes me smile!
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Your friend has some talent. This is an amazing piece.


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FREAKIN AWESOME!!
you should tell your friend caleb that he is absolutly amazing!!!!




