Sitting there on the edge of the bed,
You’re so faraway.
Come to me darling.
I’ll let your love consume me.
Tear me limb from limb.
Isn’t that what you want?
To love me?
Though I push you away,
You’ve decided to stay.
-can’t help that I’m confused
-can’t help that I don’t love you
Now, and possibly forever.
You told me that you love me…
Can that really be true?
Why do you love me,
When I don’t love you?
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it's about her again...curse it! i'll never be over her.
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Why such pain?
Why such pain? Because we gave... sacrificed yourselves for love! Our hearts expanded and let someone in and when that void is not filled and left empty it does cause great pain.
I love your words her, they haunt me.
“Sitting there on the edge of the bed,
You’re so faraway.
Come to me darling.
I’ll let your love consume me.”
Yes so true; so close but yet so far and your willingness to let love overtake you.
We have all experienced it…
I have written over 300 poems in less than a year for my loved one.
It is all about healing and moving on.
You write very personally. Do not lose who you are to pain.
Love,
Lauren -
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thanks for the lifter...and i'll try not to lose myself to pain...
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Really liked it, could kinda feel the confusion coming through in the words lol. Keep it up
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confused...
We always wonder why someone we love doesn't return our love... surely our love is big enough to fit two?
But no... it doesn't work that way!
Keep up the good work!
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Lovely & a bit sad feeling
I am going to be reading more of your poetry. I see you have deep thoughts and have a very expressive way of sharing them. Namaste, Skyemagick
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I really like the saviness of your poem
A question that forms a riddle around the poem beautiful, Powerful, and brilliantly penned. -
very nice
if its not one thing..its the other isnt it? geez...love is over-rated.
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thank you...
i would hate love...but i kinda like the confusion...
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