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Emptiness

You will know them from their eyes
Full of more reality than most will ever hold
Far away and filled with painful memories,
Their eyes cry out to you
"Fix my soul"
"Help me trust again"
All were victims, at one time
And some will be again
If no one reads their eyes
And helps them stand once more

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"Option 1" About abuse (sexual, emotional, physical).

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  • shattered logic
    May 13, 2007

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    well done,
    This is short but very powerful and true
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    You will know them from their eyes
    Full of more reality than most will ever hold
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    I love those lines, the flow is nice and the story the words told was great.
    Good job and good luck!!!


  • shattered logic
    April 25, 2007
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    Hey could I get you to put the option number you picked please and thanks!!


    • FelineMuse
      April 25, 2007
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      Thank you

      Sorry.. didn't realize you wanted the number.