The moment i gazed into your eyes
I was mesmerized and lost
Your eyes took me to a place
That was full of care and love
The moment i gazed into your eyes
I see myself in a happy place
with you by my side
Loving, Sharing, Adoring and caring
The moment i gazed into your eyes
I fell in a never ending pit
The never ending pit of love
Never ending my love for you
Author notes
This was from the heart
A contest entry
- I wan't to get lost in your eyes by shattered logic.
440 points, ended May 13, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything At All by Heavenly Angel.
26000 points, ended June 9, 2007, 100 entries
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Isn't it awesome to gaze into the eyes of someone you love? To feel their heart?
I don't think there's anything greater
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Beautufully expressed
This write is deep and very touching. I was lost in your write. I will keep reading your amazing work. (Lisa)
"The moment i gazed into your eyes
I see myself in a happy place
with you by my side
Loving, Sharing, Adoring and caring"
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wow yuo can really tell this has come from the heart...this was a really really good poem
keep writing because well of course you are very talented I really enjoyed reading this piece it was so powerfull good luck!!!!
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Hey I need the option number you picked Please and thanks!!
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um 3 i beliefve i dont think i did it the right way tho
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