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Blind

Beautiful Gray eyes
Blinded by what they see
I`ve really always knew
you`ve never trusted me
Haunted by an angelic face
Cut by my own vanity
You valued their perfect lies
over your loves sanity
She hears your beautiful laughter
shes sad because its fake
she is so tired of crying
and she thinks that she might break.
No,this isnt a guilt trip,
its very simply true,
If you cant trust her
then she cant trust you
Obviously you hold the past against her
though you say you dont
Yes,please tell her not to worry
but she cant say that she wont.
Lying in the graveyard
singing on a crypt
Her mind is growing heavy
from the cyanide she sipped.
Please tell her that you love her,
just tell her one last time.
Kiss her,hold her close...
even though love is blind.

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  • The Outspoken Nobody
    April 26, 2007
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    Great poem

    I liked this poem it was really well written, anyway thank you for the comments on my poems and I'm sorry you havnt found your trust in God yet maybe one day he can open your eyes the way he opened mine and your life will go as good as mines been going since then, till that day you are in my prayers...
    -Outspoken

  • mysterydragon
    April 25, 2007

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    creeopy picture, but it really made me want to continue in reading the poem. im glad i did too. thats a killer ending and i really enjoyed reading this.