I smile
You cringe
I say "I love you"
You laugh inside yourself
My pain is your pleasure
Your weapon of choice
I won't forget this time
The wounds are too deep
I am ashamed of your
juvenile tongue
Knives can't hurt me
the way you have
Oh they say
"Sticks and stones"
I say
words are harder to forget
I'm leaving now
I won't be taking you
with me this time
"Goodbye"
Does not matter
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them words do cut deeper than a knife!!!
Oh yeah you got that right about "words"~ugh I hate it when someone makes you feel this way, you feel so alone and isolated from the pain of their so called love~goodbye is the only option left to get out!Bravo~love this Tammy Jo!!
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Ah ~ MissSpunky ~
I have missed you and a few others here too.
I'm sure most of you know that I take many breaks from a
public site. A site such as this, "Poetry" reveals so much about ourselves. And yes, I sometimes take shelter from the secrets that I have revealed.
Luv you cyberly dear one.
Oh, Thanx 4 tha clappy's.
Yertweetyness
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So so true about poetry and how it reveals ourself~sometimes I have even written something secretely but posted it here then deleted it,lol~But however it is soooo nice of how our cyber AP friends are always there with comfort or words of wisdom~I know when my late fiance' passed away I wrote so much about my grief and the pain of his loss(it seemed to help me just by writting it out)~many people are so supportive and comforting~You are definatly 1 of the ones here that are very special to me and I am so grateful for the cyber world of friendship!!~~KEEP your chin up!! See you on myspace!
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sad
Sad is love , but without it only loneliness...
A little satire in this poem , smooth as lonely is.
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Thank-you
Capricornpoet,
Thanx 4 tha clappy's.
I think most of my poetry has a touch of satire.
Again, thank-you
Yertweetyness
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