I sat in the back of the room
silently writing
poetry of real gloom
battered and bruised
I felt alone
my heart had been brutally abused
The sound of the door slamming
brought me back to reality
the person I saw
began me s-s-tammering
something about his carefree strut
brang drool to my lips
and an [not so] innocent lust
He sat down beside me
and boy did i blush
at the sight i did see
his dark hazel eyes
held mystery
along with surprise
i got lost in the fantasy world
all in those eyes
I began to feel dizzy
and the room began to twirl
i wanted to much
to reach out and kiss
those eyes, and lips
so soft, so lush
but my urges i contained
and smile i did
and my heart from then on
was forever stained
even now as i lie
i remember so clear
The mystery
that was held in those eyes.
Author notes
Opt.2 10- The first glimpse
A contest entry
- I wan't to get lost in your eyes by shattered logic.
440 points, ended May 13, 2007, 19 entries
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Comments
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Well done,
This is very well done, the flow is great, and I loved were you took this piece. I really liked the first few stanzas, your imagery was very nice, and your word choice is great.
Good job and good luck!!!!

