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Erotic Summer night

Your shadow is above me as we lay under the night sky
You move your hands downward I feel you touch my thigh
I lay dressed in nature’s wardrobe and my pulse begins to race
Your fingers trace my skin and I feel your breathe upon my face
I marvel at the stars and feel my body overflow
Your movements are so sensual your movements are so slow
I feel your kiss upon my neck causing me to quiver in delight
Our bodies are in rhythm our bodies are high in erotic flight
Your skin against mine as you pull me closer into your embrace
Our bodies dancing, waltzing with such poise and sexual grace
Like summer rain you enchant me with your heat
You press your lips to mine your kisses taste so sweet
Our souls are filled with passion like the summer’s air
We gaze into each others eyes, locked in each others stare
You whisper the words I love you lightly into my ear
You say the words so softly yet they are so clear
The night is now over our love making has come to a close
We lay in the stillness our bodies retiring into sweet repose

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crymeacoustic

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  • bird-mad girl
    May 18, 2007

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    very lovely dovey. It was sweet. Like a blooming flower. Thats how I thought of this piece. A flower mixed with innocence and seducation.