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No One Knows What I've Seen

No one knows what I've seen
All that's appalling, all that's unclean
Behind the facade, behind closed doors
Children screaming, broken and sore
Blades that cut, slit, and tear
A young life is taken and nobody cares
She seeks a love to satisfy
Only to be left with bruises inside
He escapes the pain with needle and drink
Pushing himself closer to the brink
The evil behind this, we refuse to see
They've committed sins of which I cannot speak
They play games that end in death
Out of their mouths spews crimson breath
They sink their talons into our minds
Hoping to kill all they find
People wonder  why I cry
Because people refuse to open their eyes
No one understands, no one believes
No one knows what I've seen

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  • Sacrificed Ram
    April 25, 2007
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    Love it!!


  • PoetsAngel
    April 25, 2007

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    Very good, I like this, I do enjoy a nice dark write, thanks for entering...you may need to edit the author's notes