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PerfectImperfection

Poetry that will completely take you out of this world
Every word you read has such meaning
Reading her work is an honor to me
Finding I can relate to
Everything that's written down.
Complicated forms or completely free verse
They're no challenge for a poet like Wendy.
I'm left speechless everytime I finish that last line
Made to perfection, just like herself!
Pretty little stanza's or dark, emotional verse
Everything she writes is written with care
Ranting or crying, love or total anger
Feelings that are hard to find written down elsewhere.
Everybody knows her, and everybody loves her
Creations that inspire everyone, I'm sure
The perfect wife and successful loving mother
I couldn't ask for a better aunt!
Only I can say for sure, there's
No other aunty that I could love more!

Author notes

Written for my amazing AP aunt, PerfectImperfection She's so amazing, she's really helped me along on AP. Nobody else has inspired me and willed me on as much as Wendy, and I really don't think this poem does her justice, but it's exactly what I wanted to say

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Written about: PerfectImperfection
Written by: Wulfareika

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  • Lowell Poe
    April 28, 2007

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    This is very Walt Whitman. You have a great talent. SHOUT IT!Love is great! Take you out of this world. Tell all about the love you feel.This old world is so cold, don't care nothin for your soul,but your own ones.

    God Bless,
    LOWELL POE

  • She Stole My Voice
    April 27, 2007

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    Aw cute.
    I love it
    I hope she sees it- she'll love it too!

    Thank you for entering!


    ~Princess of Shadows~


  • Russian Red
    April 27, 2007

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    this is great..it made me smile. this is a great tribute for a great author. many kudos to you on this piece. keep up the great work


  • WindUpEnigma gold member
    April 27, 2007

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    You really are talented, y'know? I can't write form/rhymed poetry to save my life. Just unfettered words, spilling onto a page, that's all I ever manage.
    This is very sweet, and poetry (in my mind) is the best tribute one can give to a friend.
    Best of luck in the contest


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    April 27, 2007

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    AP families have been a big help to a lot of younger poets. This is a fitting tribute, full of high praise, and I'm sure she is very pleased to see it
    Cyberartist


  • countrybabe gold member
    April 26, 2007

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    Nicely Written

    This piece is very nicely written. I am sure your Aunt will love this. It is very touching. Good luck to you in the current contest you have this entered in.

    Keep writing

    Countrybabe

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