I am giving up, turning in my pain
Lingering on in the life I thought was great
Love in an image, agony in remission
Fighting a losing battle
Running from lubricious memories
Falling desires of your voice
You saw it, that horrid night
Your eyes turned forlorn
I fear that you look upon me never more
I re-less what ties my heart to you
As I let it fly trough the sky
I let go my sheer desire
Author notes
SummerTimeBlossems
A contest entry
- Picture Options by WarmHeartedGeisha.
425 points, ended May 9, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow, I'm just as impressed by the imagery and pain shown in this! You are gifted and definitely showing some definite talent! This is TOTALLY worthy of winning!
Monica <3 -
very awesome.
this is a very interseting peice. i really enjoyed this. your a great writer keep up the great work.
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Wonderful write! Beautiful flow of ur words, and the pain is very vivid. Wonderful!
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