When the tracks of love derailed
on planet of earth
The conscious lovers unable to tie the knots
virtually planned to take an extreme step and plunged to death
with aview to have rebirth again so fast in future times
When the traces of their remains were exhumed and looked at
Aghast!!! Two skeletons stood erect embracing each other
not forgetting their past bests
Author notes
when love critically fails
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration II by HerbalGoat.
300 points, ended April 26, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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very interesting thoughts written in a way that provides beauty to the sadness of love failing.
Your last stanza holds my favorite three lines of your entire poem. It wraps the meaning of your poem together nicely. -
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kind words
thank you nina madam for the kind words
purush
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