This feeling with you has me light on my feet-
it lifts me up so I can't be beat...
It wraps me up in a cocoon
letting me grow safely as I swoon...
I can't see what's ahead
but I don't want to know-
I'm too enlightened
by this enrapturing show...
What takes me trembling
by my tripping heart-
warms my nervous soul
and keeps me from falling apart.
It holds on to me tight
and it won't let go-
my fears are pushed back
and I let myself grow...
This feeling with you has me light on my feet-
it lifts me up so I can't be beat.
And if I am knocked down I know it'll take my hand,
it will savor my heart and help me to stand.
It keeps me awake in dreams with no sleep-
a feeling of comfort that I wish to keep.
This feeling with you has me light on my feet-
it lifts me up...so I can not be beat.
Author notes
This is a song as well as a poem about the best thing in my life as of this moment. He's a very good influence...
A contest entry
- **Blue Eyes and Secret Smiles by madgirlslovesong.
525 points, ended May 29, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lyricists and Songwriters!! by Andy Stephenson.
800 points, ended May 12, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Interesting Lyrics
I found this to be interesting. Do you have a melody? Thanks for entering my contest. I really appreciate it.
Andy
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Thank you, I did have a melody while I was writing this...but I can't remember how it went.
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Very nice
A very nice song .... Well done and thanks for the entry ... I enjoy this one
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Oh i know what this is about!!!
shall i say it? of course i know what this is meant for! and actually...its a happy poem! its like...thy first heppy poem!....at least the first in a long while!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!
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