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218

When the door to room 218
has been locked and abandoned
I will think of all that those walls
witnessed

They watched the flower
planted
The hopes I used
for fertilizer

The walls where there
when the flower sprouted
When the first leaves
came into view
When we held
each other by the petals
until the flower bloomed

The walls watched us
grow into a mesmerizing
blossom
Flaws at the edges
but a solid core

Now our flower has
reached it’s end
but the core has not
The seeds we’ve sown
take root and replace
the wilted

And so our love will always renew
even when the edges are frayed
For our hearts are strong and locked in love
full of the bouquets we’ve reaped

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  • Shapla
    April 25, 2007

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    "And so our love will always renew
    even when the edges are frayed
    For our hearts are strong and locked in love
    full of the bouquets we’ve reaped"

    These lines are very true and magnificently beautiful.
  • PalmettoSky
    April 25, 2007
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    Now our flower has
    reached it’s end
    but the core has not
    The seeds we’ve sown
    take root and replace
    the wilted



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