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I Promise....

Love me tender
Love me sweet
Love me like you'll never let me go

Don't hurt me
Don't break me
Don't tear my heart out

Hold me gently
Hold me lovingly
Hold me like tommorrow will never come

Please don't forsake me
Please don't desert me
Please don't kill my soul

Kiss me happily
Kiss me longinly
Kiss me with your heart

I beg you don't leave me
I beg you don't judge me
I beg you not to destroy my heart

I ask these things of you
With all of my heart and soul
If you promise not to kill me
I promise not to...

Kill You.....

Author notes

I created this poem for a contest and it really just came to me. I didn't have any past experience that motivated it, t just came. I hope you enjoy it! ^^

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Comments

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    June 20, 2008
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    i like this! a very lovely poem!

    great emotions. amazing depth!

    AWESOME!!!


  • Dragonia
    August 14, 2007

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    What can I say... I won't kill you..... *leans over and whispers 'I'm glad he doesn't know where I live.'

    Keep writing you silly bunny.

    ~Dragonia~


  • KillerFairySpider
    April 26, 2007
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    Man sis, this is awesome! I love it. I like the flow, very creative.

  • heartofpainfultears
    April 25, 2007

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    this is wonderful this is the type of poem i am looking for but go back in your arthurs notes and put what poem it is

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