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Repairing Peteskid's Passion

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Peteskid

Pressed by pulse and push of life’s
evocative stretch of heart,
‘tis this that makes measure of a man;
eventide’s un-caging of his woe.  This curl
so dearly wrought by rise, through dream’s
kind softening and succoring of angst.
In this, dear heart, I see you reach to know
destiny’s darning of a well-used soul.





Author notes

Peteskid http://allpoetry.com/Peteskid
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quote from his home page: "this unhappiness will one day prove useful"


jpg - Homage to a Great Violinist - Vardi

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  • poetryality silver member
    November 20, 2008

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    I love PK! This is such an honorable work of poetry. It sings in the highest key, notes of adoration is the melody. Very beautiful and as wonderful as the man himself. Your words are endearing and filled with truth. A grand tribute to Peteskid!

    CONGRATULATIONS ON EARNING THE GOLD!


    Always ♥

    Renee


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    June 21, 2007
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    Awesome!!!

  • She Stole My Voice
    April 25, 2007
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    I'm left speechless.
    I really am.


    ♥

    ~Princess of Shadows~


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      May 11, 2007
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      ty, I am spending some time honoring my favorite pen friends. He is a great friend and this honors him as well.


  • Peteskid gold member
    April 25, 2007
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    Oh my goodness!

    I am so delighted, so humbled, and so very grateful... Thank you...PK


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 25, 2007

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    "‘tis this that makes measure of a man;
    eventide’s un-caging of his woe. This curl
    so dearly wrought by rise"

    Ahhh, how wonderful a penning this is, my Sister...A very impressive acrostic, my Friend...& I know you will bring tears to his eyes for such a lovely, loving gesture on his behalf...Gorgeous piece, Sweetie...Good luck in the contest... Wanda


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      May 11, 2007
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      You are welcome dear friend. Friendship is important in any arena and poetry sites are no different to me than real lfie.

  • Rowan gold member
    April 25, 2007

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    I love his work too..this is such a fine tribute to a fine man.
    Lovely acrostic, I never would have known it was one, if not for the title of the contest. Excellent.


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      May 11, 2007
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      ty, Rowan, He is one of my newest pen friends and sits on my favorites because I have watched his writing grow and develop more with each new poem.

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