Focusing closer to the cup,
Cupboard bare to add dab of cream,
Creamy glazed eyes will soon wake up,
Upright posture wants java gleam,
Gleaming frosting on the donut,
Nuts sprinkled adding to the treat,
Treaty to end fast’s question, what?
Whatever is close, this is sweet!
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wreath
I left the comment on 05, but couldn't find a proper link to the direct photo, so I didn't post the cup.
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A contest entry
- A Spot by ea.
500 points, ended April 27, 2007, 13 entries
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Is wreath a form of poetry, I know most forms but clicked in this list as I did not recognise the name with the other forms.
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Yes, it is an old form, I learned of it from this contest:
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2343292
My entry in it, is to say, unique.....
You are supposed to end a line, then start the next with the same word. I try to find as many homonyms as possible....LOL
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Yes, I haven't been able to figure this out either, how you get a link to the actual cup, but carcrashhumor did and if you go to her poem and press her photo link, you can reach your own photo's link by clicking on previous or next. Wierd how it doesn't just show up like that when you are viewing it. Maybe you need a certain server.
Cute wreath, once again employing sections of the words inventively and making the wreath aspect quite subtle this time around. This makes me laugh thinking of the possibility of sprinkled donuts in Rome. But they are in a couple places here now so anything's possible. You chose the site owner's pic; I wonder what she thinks of the invasion of AP today.
Thanks for entering the Xperiment!
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