She sits at her windowsill,
Tears streaming down her face.
Watching the sunset
Is this her fate?
Her head spins with thoughts.
Everything reminds her of you.
The song on the radio,
The leaves on the trees,
The wind brushing against her face;
Nothing can get you out of her mind.
She can't take this.
It's ripping her,
Limb from limb.
Does she deserve this?
She loved you.
You were her everything.
When you steal something so precious,
What do you expect she has left?
You left her with nothing.
When you were upset, who was really the most upset?
Yeah. That's right. Her.
But when you muttered those three words.
That sinister sentence.
Her heart gave out.
She couldn't take it.
You were her mind, body, and soul.
Is she only but a memory?
This wasn't some boy-girl love.
This was a true friendship.
And all you can do is crush it?
Hun, you think you've got it bad;
But look at her, she's the one that tripped.
Author notes
sallysunshine94
Theme: True Friendship
A contest entry
- so pretty much anything by Last Pixie.
300 points, ended June 11, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Truth Of Life contest Round TWO (invite only) by xandercheerios.
800 points, ended July 15, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow this is a great poem it is very good
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Man I commented on this and everything, and then my internet froze up. I think you really touched a wonderful point in this poem, and that is that a true friendship is more important than most other relationships. And once again, your ending is astounding!
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thank youuuu!! god i love you alex! ♥
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wow. so real. is there a story behind this poem? raw passion. wonderful. thank you for entering.
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yeah. sort of..no prob =]
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The reality of this poem is so real because so many people can relate to this, great write and thanks for entering.
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thank you and no problem. =]
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You know I could definitly relate to tis poem.....but Im kind of like the girl ya talking about in this poem that's how I relate to this poem.Good job.......keep up the good work.
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thank you!
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Wow
You know I could definitly relate to tis poem.....but Im kind of like the girl ya talking about in this poem that's how I relate to this poem.Good job.......keep up the good work.
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refer to the above comment. heh
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