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Love in the form of abuse

A steady hand slaps your cheek
You stare on with a blank face
Your not suprised, yet who would be
It happens every night
The same punishment for being alive
He strips you naked, having his way with you
What can you do, you can't fight back
You'll never get away
This hellish nightmare haunts you
Stealing your innocence
It hurts yet you do nothing to stop it
Your love for him matches your hate
A beautiful mix brought together by your tears
The skys cry for you, the earth shudders at your screams
Forgotten by everyone, they're always left out of the stupid game
A game you play with him
A game that leaves you crying for more,
but beging for it to stop
The pain is never ending
It won't end for you
Not ever

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  • WishMeAway--x
    May 23, 2007
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    A game you play with him
    A game that leaves you crying for more,
    but beging for it to stop
    The pain is never ending
    It won't end for you
    Not ever

    this is incredible. so sad as all of these poems have been.
    thanks for telling your story and good luck
    ♥Chaos


  • Sonofdead
    May 20, 2007

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    this gets to me in a special way. i have a friend that went through something very close to this. very nice.


  • Chindi Yaz
    April 25, 2007

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    a fine write. very painful to get through, but i love the emotion buried within it. much love.
    --Rianna


  • poetry within
    April 25, 2007

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    Such sadness lyes within this page. What a nightmare,having part of yourself taking from you piece by piece day by day. I come from an abusive home and have been in a few abusive relationships. I can relate to this poem somewhat. You never really forget,You can forgive if you have it in your heart to. It's something that stays with you like a scar upon your skin. Such a sad sad emotional write. My heart aches after reading this piece.
    great job on emotions I loved this line
    "The skys cry for you, the earth shudders at your screams"
    I could feel your words as I read them. powerful indeed.


  • Kandy Floss
    April 25, 2007

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    oh my god! did this actually happen or was it just for the contest, u dont even have to tell me if u dont feel u want to but i seriously hope that u didnt have to go through that be cause i have n i know what it feels like xxxxxxxxxxxxx

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