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Loving you

We met so long ago
my love i have to show
each and every day
my darling i must say

My lady
my lady
I'm in love with you,

My lady
my lady
my love for you is true,

When we are apart
my love it is so strong
many miles away
my darlin I must say

My lady
my lady
I'm in love with you

My lady
my lady
my love for you is true


Oh my darling sweetheart
kiss me once again
you fill my heart with emotion
so darling I must say

My lady
my lady
I'm in love with you

My lady
my lady
my love for you is true

Loving you is easy
you've got the biggest heart
loving you is easy
I've loved you from the start.

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  • Earth Mother
    December 28, 2008
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    Very good

    You are so very clever with words, you had me convinced!.

  • The Countess
    December 15, 2008
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    plausable

    you souned as if you meant it?


  • Andy Stephenson
    April 30, 2007

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    Thanks

    It is easy to see the pattern of verses and choruses here. Do you have a melody for this? Thanks for entering my contest.

    Andy


  • Angel-Crestfallen
    April 26, 2007
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    very nice

    this was very nice and cute ... Well done and thank you for the entry... Be Well

  • LaurenLightning--x
    April 26, 2007
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    Aww..

    This is a beautiful poem.
    I find writing about love hard, but you make it look effortless. And the rhyming is very good the whole way through!
    I love the lines :

    Oh my darling sweetheart
    kiss me once again

    Well done!! This is a lovely poem.

    Shade Of Glitter xX

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