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Always Forward

 

There was a time
when I could read a poem I'd written
and be enamored with it every time.
I suppose I was trying to convince myself
that I could actually write.
Now, a poem is dead to me
as soon as the ink dries.

Maybe it's the constant ebbing of time
or some kind of real maturity, at last,
but the only poem
that means anything to me now
is the one I'm currently working on.

I suppose that's how it should be.
Today is all that matters, as they say.
Reading and re-reading old poems
is just another way to live in the past
and lose the present.

Today, right now,
there are new friends to make
new places to see
new experiences to be had
and new poems
waiting to be written.
Poems that are alive,
poems that breathe,
that laugh and cry.

There will be time enough to reflect
when I'm old, with no energy left for adventures,
but while there's youth left to spend,
the only path I'm interested in
is the one that goes forward.
Always, forward.

The big, messy world
with all it's madness and beauty
is calling me again, loudly.

I'll be right back
and I'll tell you all about it.















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  • AusStar gold member
    May 21

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    Very Insightful and also good advice. I must admit at the moment I'm enjoying reading over the poems I've written, especially the funny ones. They make me smile.

  • Destiny Fate
    September 23, 2007

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    OMG!! I believe you pin pointed my position as where I'm at in writing or what others would call writers block. I go back over the last 4 years and they all seem the same most about my relationship which I'm still in, and though at the time of writing them it really did help, even the ones I wrote out of madness the next day re-reading them I laughed. Nothing's change,as far as my relationship, but I only blame myself, but I feel no need to waste the same words that others may relate to but the person I was trying to despartely reach I had to read them to and wonder, well I don't even have to wonder, I know, he hasn't heard a thing. My thoughts are my set on the world what I see it as and the crazy things that are stupid, funny, or whatever it may be. I just can't word what I want to say or write the way you do. I suppose the real thing is I'm sitting here still lonely not wanting to change my relationship but not wanting to write about the world but really stand up, speak out, and make some change or contribution of a change to the world. And to me if you're not rich,(I'm dreaming of winning the lottery, in which I'm against,ha,ha) or hhave some major back up, the freedom of speech will only get one in a whole mess of trouble.
    Tonya Turner


  • MariGoes gold member
    August 6, 2007

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    There are always new sights and sounds waiting for us, and with them new poems. And you my friend, will always be the Happy Wanderer


    • Mark Rickerby gold member
      August 6, 2007
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      Yay! I got a visit from my first, best friend at AP when I joined three years ago. (Has it been that long?) And you even remembered my original name. How have you been??? Great, I hope.

      Mark

  • Maureen silver member
    June 4, 2007

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    Sounds good to me! Make sure it's your 'best' foot that moves forward and you can't go wrong!

    I'll be looking forward to hearing (i.e., reading) about your new adventures.

    Happy trails to you!
    Maureen


  • Whoochi gold member
    May 28, 2007
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    This is taken from an excellent perspective almost as if we were talking on the phone...I am going to traipse thru your poetry garden, if ya don't mind, because I can hardly believe all those shiney trohpys are for lousy poems...but hey what do i know..and yeah I will be right back too! LOL


  • Jade Scorpion
    May 14, 2007

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    I clicked on this by accident (at random) and simply can't read it because of the obtrusive background! I'll try another of yours seeing I'm here, but that will depend on if I can find the "next by ....." button!

  • lencio-sunchild
    May 14, 2007

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    So true, its like you and me are having a conversation here about this subject. I am not surprised nor moved to read this, but happy that one of us wrote it. You know I have always admired ur work, because many a times we share similar thoughts and ideas, Your work, your writes is something that gives nourishment to my soul, truly Mark. This is simply wonderful.

    Been long I know,
    Love and light,
    Lencio


  • williamstown
    April 26, 2007
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    Have I not just read and commented on this under an easier to read format? Can`t critisise the poem that is excellent, but if that`s your car I can criticise your driving with dangling dice distracting from the job in hand. Its hard enough to read the (poem/road) without them


  • queenie
    April 26, 2007

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    and i will be glad to hear about where your wanderlust takes you.i can relate to this to a great degree but i am not an adventurer anymore and i hope you have enough for the both of us.this is a very unique piece and very entertaining.


  • superstition
    April 25, 2007

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    This is definitely a unique write on a familiar concept of living, and I really like it! It almost sounds more like a conversation than an actually reflection time to me. Maybe it's because of that final line which leaves us knowing there's more to come in the future...in any case, I enjoyed reading this, and it left me thinking a lot. I'm one of those people that gets caught up in reflection all the time...daydreaming...nostalgia...memories...sometimes it's best to go out there and just make new memories than to play off from all the old ones. Good thoughts here.


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 25, 2007

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    "There will be time enough to reflect
    when I'm old and nodding by the fire
    but while there's youth left to spend,
    the only path I'm interested in
    is the one that goes forward.
    Always, forward."

    Carry on, my Friend...We'll follow where you lead...A re~Mark~able penning, dear Scribe...Indeed, it is best not to look back too often, but to always look forward, towards the beckoning horizon, where the new poems await your grasp...Well done, Sweetie...Love the fuzzy dice... Wanda

  • ocerus
    April 25, 2007

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    Interesting, Mark. It seems more like a description of the philosophy of poetry than poetry itself, if you ask me, but I like it a great deal nonetheless. In fact, it's one of the rare poems here that brought me something akin to inner peace. I personally probably spend too much time memorizing old poems I've written. But the thing is, I love them and I don't want to lose them. If I stick them away in the old memory bank, strong and sure, then I can keep them and share them where and when I want - and recite them to myself and my invisible audience as well. But I really don't write enough new stuff, and your idea of traveling the globe (though impossible for me) and writing about new places and peoples is fascinating. Very good Mark! And as I said, utterly inspiring!! - ocerus


  • dp robertson
    April 25, 2007

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    Well this may be the first piece for a while that has actually surprised me.

    No rhymes, no predictability in either structure and to a degree, message. However the message it does hold holds true for most artists. The only piece that counts, the only one that holds ephemeral charm is that which you are working on. Where the power to decorate a blank sheet with your own words…that is magic. Or until the next thought comes and then that old poem is an ace away of, I was really expecting a phone call before now! This is a good piece. It is not art, it is just truth. It is is a well scripted truth at that.

    David


    PS What the fuck is that font doing on that pupil torturing background?

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