And I do not have wings,
but love does,
so in the night my Soul
flies into your window.
She sings to you in your sleep,
holds you close to her
blue ethereal warmth, and waits.
Waits in the hope that your
Soul will let you hear
this beautiful song,
...I love you dear one...,
in the hope that somehow
you will listen
and find comfort
in what you have known
all along.
Please tell me what you think
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And in that song he will listen...smiles..
Beautiful..
In terms of endearment "sweet "would not justify the power of asking someone to simply listen!
very well written..
Peace
~M~
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'your Soul will let you hear this beautiful song,'-this is ao awesome-your entire poem has this beautiful haunting quality to it which is indeed very appealing-'in what you have known
all along. 'this is so relating
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...I love you dear one...,
in the hope that somehow
you will listen
what a wonderful work is here my friend..just fascinating journing of upur muse is here...It is really a sentimental flow of the love and its magic my friend..The script is softly revealing there a story of the core which demands for its meaning of the facts instead of the imaginative thoughts of the
life...The crescendo of the thoughts hauled here are truly amazing and touching..Very impressive work is here... a great work...
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a great poem
you will listen
and find comfort
in what you have known
all along
This is just beautiful voice of your heart my friend and the song of your yearning is just very spritual in terms of its flow and desires..I loved this ..a great poem...and thanks for your kind comments on my poem...
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Very endearing... So sweetly expressed words of love....
the depth of with seems to be so vast that one has to imaging not measure it's scope...... This poem lights a fire within the heart of the readers soul.... Delightfully done.... Enjoyable reading....... -
Oh this is so beautiful. I love the image you have created in this piece. It flows with beauty and elegance, giving the reader that feeling of love and hope. This is something that everyone at some time or another can relate to. A real breath of fresh air to the site. Well done xx
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sounds very personal, weird how something so personal can be made universal? very imaginative and unique, not like any other poem i have read in a long time
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So sweet! Love can do amazing things to people. You wrote this well,I'm lost for words,but i know if someone was to write me a sweet letter with such lovely words, I would fall in love all over again.Your words are dear. I love your poem
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