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Suicide

Suicide it’s not the answer!!!!
Death doesn't fix things
What about the ones.......
who are left alive?

All the unanswered questions of why?

Death isn't glitter and gold
I don't know what you've been listening to or what you've been told

Death and evil gnawing at your flesh!!!!!

COME TO ME ....
I'LL PUT ALL YOUR PAIN TO REST...

Knives, pills, razor blades,
or bullet holes
they are not the answer
to a peaceful soul

It will drive you crazy...
it will drive you mad....
but nothing is bad enough
to drive you to death.

Just because you are gone
there are people who love you
that will carry on.
The pain doesn't end
just because you are dead.

So, the next time that suicide
rears its ugly head
calling out to you
to claim you for dead.

Close your ears
and open your eyes
there are people
who love you!!!!!!!

that don't want you to die....

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  • Musicqueen1012
    May 6, 2007

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    wo0ow

    This poem is really good. My friend cries alot on the phone because everyone she loves always turns to suicide. All it does is bring more pain on your family and friends and it doesn't even make you happy. Suicide is telling everyone that you gave up, that you aren't strong enough to live like everyone else. Suicide is sin, so if there such a thing as a heaven or hell, who knows where will you go.