Mystical nights journey into wet dimensions,
reveal inner beauty growing in flight.
Silent echo’s calling my soul to answer,
on majestic moonlit nights of eternities bliss.
I long to see him within my dreams of life,
mixing his body with mine in eternal salvation.
A lustful imagination of sin has over come my soul,
leaving me wanting more of his elegant words.
As the moon sets with sadness untold,
my heart longs for your arms around me.
Holding me in sensual tones of embraces,
as our love comes together as a solid breath.
A contest entry
- Gentle Soothing Fantasy by Tablet Of Essence.
432 points, ended May 14, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Through your words flows such as is the ways of the heart, whether they be good or not. Each see's something different as good of course but in the same in the end, for it may bring out the same out come. As long as it gets the message across I guess is the needed thing.Words what a world in it's self. Such beauty with just a shape of a pen or in thie case a mouse. What I read in your words is alot of hard work, which I am sure you know that. I got alot of good out of this write. and I would like to thank you so much for posting it in my contest.
Forever;
Etching Letters -
Really rich imagery in here supported by great word choices. Love it (and it matches the picture nicely).
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