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Eventually,

everything breaks-

Like the cup you dropped

when my jaw did.


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  • sweetpearl
    April 29, 2007
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    Yeah this is a nice little piece. Hard hitting short emotional piece.


  • intanglio2ring
    April 27, 2007

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    Lovely Little Ditty

    Dear CarCrashHumor,
    Proving the point that small is tremendous!
    Ba Da Da
    Congrats on the Silver
    Tang


  • ea silver member
    April 25, 2007
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    This is wonderful. I love this. ♥ What a great photo and one that might be overlooked to the undiscerning eye. Classy. Thanks for coming on board here at the cafeXperiment and if you get a chance, fill up another cup. They're bottomless.

    P.S. I didn't read this as being caught, I read it as gorgeousness. Like love at first sight.


  • UCaNtSeeME
    April 25, 2007
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    I like this. Really simple words and they still pack a punch. Good Write.


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    April 25, 2007
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    Short and powerful. I instinctively reached for my own jaw upon reading this poem.

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