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Ordinary Asshole

*Verse 1*
I waited for you last night,
hoping you would come around,
but you never did show up.
you left me standing there...
squeezing the life
from this heart...
that I gave to you,
but I guess was rejected

~Chorus~
I thought you felt the same for me.
I guess I was just so very wrong...
why did I bother? why did I even try?
thought we had something there, I guess we just didn't.
next time...I wont fall for an ordinary asshole

*Verse 2*
I left the house.
I went walking through the cemetry,
my quiet place...my secret place...
wondering why you stood me up.
if I was so bad, why did you even bother?
what did I see in you? what did I feel for you?
I guess this is my new lesson to learn.
to know to stay away from guys that are just like you

~Chorus 2~
I thought you might have felt the same...for me
I knew this must be so very wrong, cuz it felt so perfect.
why did I bother to think that? why did I bother to try to fix that?
I should have figured there was nothing there to go on,
but next time...I wont fall for an ordinary asshole...

*Verse 3*
I didn't bother to call you.
I didn't even look at you.
I can see you watching me from the corner of my eye,
but I don't really care
your nothing to me...never will be again.
I'd rather slit my throat...
then ever feel your touch...hear your sweet voice
that makes me grit my teeth...you make me grit my teeth...

~Chorus 2~

((instrumental bridge))

~Chorus 1~ X2

Author notes

hey
something i came up with...i kinda had a fight with my bf, he isn't the asshole in the song lol, but it feed this. Sorry for the cursing...but it;s my feelings. Thanks.

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  • Trixie08
    May 21, 2007

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    I loved it and I could see as well as hear music to match the words. I would love to get it on a CD so I could listen to it all day, every day. This just rocks. Great Song and powerful words.


  • CrazyBeauty
    April 28, 2007

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    joey....wow...this is filled with pain....especially this:
    I didn't bother to call you.
    I didn't even look at you.
    I can see you watching me from the corner of my eye,
    but I don't really care
    your nothing to me...never will be again.
    I'd rather slit my throat...
    then ever feel your touch...hear your sweet voice
    that makes me grit my teeth...you make me grit my teeth...

    wow i hope everything is okaii...im here if you wanna tlk


    • livingItup
      April 29, 2007
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      yeah everything is okay right now for the moment ^^ hehe i guess i had a lot of steam to let out. muhahaha.
      your comment means mucho though. thanks. an oh hey,
      do you have a myspace? so like we could keep in touch more?


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    April 25, 2007

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    dang, this is a strong song, lol, how bad was that fight, lol, but you know i think this is good a golden expression of what you felt, keep it flowing

    • livingItup
      April 25, 2007
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      hey
      thanks ^^. its was pretty bad. it was the first time he has ever yelled at me. we are still not talking yet.
      your comment means much.
      you always give me the flattering comments. ^^
      your amazin

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