What you did,
I can't let it go.
You cut me deep,
Stole from me,
Hurt me,
Bruised me,
Killed me,
Both inside and out.
There are scars,
Scars from a past life.
Scars you put on me.
You destroyed all that I was.
You left me an empty shell,
A shell of a former life,
Back when I was happy.
After you were done with me,
And threw me out the door,
I promised myself,
Without rhyme or reason:
If I ever see you again,
I will fucking kill you.
Author notes
yeah don't get me fucking started.
love happens once in a lifetime. the difference lies in how many time you're willing to live in the time that you're alive.
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I really like this one
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i like this. It's overflowing with anger and it's not a fake anger or one that's out of control or out of line. it's accusotory in a way that most efficiantly brings a predator to shame. i'm very sorry you had to go through this, believe me i know what it's like and it sucks. anybody who can find the strength to be angry in the midst of so much abuse is role model to all. It's so easy to stay quiet and do as you're asked and i give you major props for fighting back. you're awesome!
-angel -
LOVE your maddness!
You just go on and say it how it is friend!
Absolutely great!
After you were done with me,
And threw me out the door,
I promised myself,
Without rhyme or reason:
If I ever see you again,
I will fucking kill you.
~ Awesome write! ~
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