Tell me you really care for me
Tell me I'm not like the rest
Whisper in my ear
That I'm the best
Feed me your sugar
Until I puke
Force-feed these lies
I'll only rebuke
Try to tell me
That you're sweet
Feed me, feed me
Your bland, fake feast
With a finger in the air
And another down my throat
I'll regurgitate your lies
And the bitter sugar-coat
I've been down this lane
And with my blood it was painted
I've had it with being used
My heart has been tainted
Keep devising these lines
I'll keep getting sick
I'm fed up with believing
I'm a cold-hearted bulimic
Author notes
No, this isn't about ACTUAL bulimia.
It's about throwing back up all the lies guys just looking to get some will feed you.
Thanks for taking your time to read this. All comments are very much appreciated. =)
A contest entry
- Love Hurts by forget my memories.
700 points, ended May 12, 2007, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Give me your opinions!
Comments
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Man, I love this one. Your awesome, Kipp.
Much Love,
Sarah
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This is wonderful,Kippers. Well it's a sad tpoic but wonderfully written. I love the imagry and metaphores. The flow and wording's well done. Lmao I love these lines:
With a finger in the air
And another down my throat
I'll regurgitate your lies
And the bitter sugar-coat
Keep up your writes I so very much enjoy! -
wow i love the end it went out strong. sorry it took me so long to juge my contest i has some personal things going on. i can realate to this poem a lot. the feeling of a broken heart just makes me wish to die. amazing jo bthank you for entering my contest.
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NICE!!
Wow this was a well written easy flowing write!
Feed me your sugar
Until I puke
Force-feed these lies
I'll only rebuke
Try to tell me
That you're sweet
Feed me, feed me
Your bland, fake feast
With a finger in the air
And another down my throat
I'll regurgitate your lies
And the bitter sugar-coat
The many times I could have said this...
Great job!
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