squinting at the only light lit in the room brightly shining
i find myself creep near a mirror reflecting the tear staind face
evaporating on the paper fading where im contimplating my thoughts
with blood shot eyes their tired and awaken making line for line live
giving this paper watercolors as my eyes drip
the light between the future lines is a vivid white
i cant stop...
i continue to darken this paper blurred in the blackness of my thoughts
it becomes clear when you told me you loved me so cold u admit that you lied
then you said that it was going to be alright and that i would find someone who would love me as much as i loved them
i reply with i thought that was you but you never did
i hang up the phone
now i say to myself you never did untill now...
Author notes
its phucked up when you wake up and realize in the end all you ever loved was a lie...
A contest entry
- Four years and counting.... by LionessK.
600 points, ended April 30, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lets write a lovely!! poem for your EX bf/gf by Laura.
440 points, ended May 19, 2007, 92 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
it means so much to me to hear from people that can relate or give me feedback as a writer and more personally about this poem
Comments
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im sure ive just read this!! great poem and good luck in the contest xx
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wow dude. i know this feeling all to well. and the name all to well fits the poem. knowing your situation and doing my best to understand. i know exactly where your comming from. this is good
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A very emotive writ here poet. Oft times we know that what we see is not the real but love overshadows our decision and we keep ourselves in a circumstance that leads to this end. A very well written poem, filled with sadness, and passion. Beautifully penned.
Congratulations on the Honorable Mention. A very worthy work.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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I know that feeling quite well.. never easy to go through. I think you did an excellent job putting it all in words. I could really feel the emotion.
Thank you for entering my contest.
~Kristy
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