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The Perfection in YOU

soulful woman

to know her
love
warmth
beauty
joy
giving
sensuality

to understand her
soul
mind
heart
body
spirit

to find her in your
life
mind
heart
world
universe

to be her
servant
lord
friend
lover
guardian

if you have and found this then you have found perfection for she is all these and more.

her love permeates her thoughts and dreams as her heart and soul pour forth the words that tell of who she is, was and shall ever be.

the lady in the tower
the lady in armour
the lady in the mirror
the lady in the deepest part of your soul

to have her is to have eternal love and happiness for you find it in her always

in her eyes
in her face
in her caress
in each perfect tear

know that to love her is to worship the goddess of love herself and to make all offerings of self to her to serve all with love in your heart and on our lips always.

a challange to love all as she gave her love to all.

my selfless friend


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  • kennethlaney
    September 22, 2007
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    Excellent Dedication

    Interesting woman and poetry!


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    May 3, 2007

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    Thank you for the beauty of your words..they have touched my heart. Words can never express how much at this time..
    Soulful Woman


  • slipperssun gold member
    May 1, 2007

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    this is an amazing write to a special friend... i am sure she loved the tribute...
    cheers
    jen


  • Whoochi gold member
    April 28, 2007

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    She is very slfish, I mean selfless..LOL...truly an awe-inspiring write to my favorite friend..am sure she will love it...Good job!


  • Laura
    April 28, 2007

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    wow this is amazing how lucky is noreen to ahve such a beautiful poem written well done xx
    laura xxx

  • eyesofanangel524
    April 27, 2007

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    This is an incredible write. What a wonderful tribute to an outstanding woman. Your muse intoxicates the senses in this. Your words breathe forth life in her for even those who have not been blessed by presence. Beautiful..just beautiful. I am in awe.


  • sweetestkiss1985
    April 26, 2007

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    Saddening yet sexy

    You made me cry once again. If only this were true. At least there are some men out there that believe this tale. But the sad thing is my other half could care less. For no romance or passion exists in my life. Just lonliness and depression and desire. But not desire in the way it should be. For this desire is off limits but at times I just can't help myself. For love is a powerful thing and for one to love easily is a curse. My heart burns for such a person yet my soul is in agony for I cannot have. My spirit is kindered for my passion for one is going to waste. My tears fall for such one so beautiful yet nothing can be done. Maybe one day I can have what I want.
    Beka

  • mrs234
    April 25, 2007

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    Such a perfect person, what a write, and lucky you


    Ah this lady so high up there it seems
    Could this be nothing but a dream
    To think there is someone so perfect in your eyes
    To any woman a tribute as this would be a surprise

  • Naridill gold member
    April 25, 2007

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    So sweet and the words are beautiful. You have certainly shown forth the beauty that alot of people see within her. Well done.

  • Viyanna Rosemarie
    April 24, 2007

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    she is a very awesome lady indeed. thank you for sharing this with me about my friend. viyanna rosemarie


  • Scandalous Beauty
    April 24, 2007
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    Love it


  • Mel-the-Believer
    April 24, 2007

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    This was a really beautiful poem. I loved it. Wonderfully written. I'm sure that special person loves it too. Amazing job here. Keep on writing. God Bless!

  • AnguishUnsaid
    April 24, 2007
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    Beautiful

    Wow, a description of love thats so beautiful, so true.


  • cheaphotelsign
    April 24, 2007

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    wow! WOW!! this is absolutely beautiful! you have captured & presented so many wonderful images. once again, my mind is blown. you're so good, al.


  • Cerulean gold member
    April 24, 2007
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    Wow. Well this was just wonderful. I bet she loves it. Enjoyed much the read. Be well.


  • BlessedAngel
    April 24, 2007

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    Very beautiful and quite inspiring...gently caressing the heart into pleasurable sighs...enjoyed this piece very much...smiles, Terry


  • WarmHeartedGeisha
    April 24, 2007
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    WOW! What a beautiful poem. A great Write, and a great dedication to this person. Well Done!!


  • sunshinegirl
    April 24, 2007

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    This is beautiful, most kind sir. Every word written from the heart within!! Beautiful!! (one typo though should be beauty)

    Like the beauty within your heart and soul that is pouring out of everyword within this wonderful write!!!!



  • azlyn gold member
    April 24, 2007

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    A loving tribute...you are truly blessed to have a person like this in your life. The poem was just warm and lovely, and such a welcome read after a day of toil and trouble!
    Love,
    Azlyn

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