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Thoughts of a Geisha . .

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What is life really but deceit

Are we to live hidden dreams

From behind a hidden reality

 

Can’t we be honest and forsake

Our hairpieces and makeup

Can’t we just throw aside

Our screens and fans

And be ourselves

 

What do my guests really think or feel

Am I fun . . am I entertaining ?

Will they remember me tomorrow

Would they like to take me home

Will they love me always

 

Or will all thought of me disappear

Lost in the morning hangover

Oh to be free of this veneer

Anything would be better

Than this insecurity

 

Outside pretty pink blossom

Tumbles from windswept branches

And cascade into the wet gutter

And are forgotten . .

Is that my destiny ?

  

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  • Candy6
    May 20, 2007
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    very good poem about geisha


  • Imokon
    April 26, 2007
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    Soft, tender, yet full of determination to wonder.

  • Amanda 88
    April 25, 2007
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    great and wonderful poem!! Great questions. I loved everything about it!!

  • PalmettoSky
    April 25, 2007

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    this was areally great poem. Great questions to ponder. I liked the picture and the way you formatted your poem. Good going! keep up the great work. peace and light, Kendal


  • WarmHeartedGeisha
    April 24, 2007

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    OMG! This is just beautiful!! I love everything about this poem!! Wonderful, spectacular, amazing write!!

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