Cool streaks on Heated flesh
Warm, wet, air
Bright flush of red upon her cheeks
Soft, hot, breeze
Hot streaks upon the flush
Mix cool drops
Salt trails racing to the ground
Quiet Whispers
Nights to remember
Boxes to open
Days to feel Again and Again
Swimming and singing
Dancing and running
Feeling but dying
Stopping to Live
"Living fast or dying slow"
That's the choice we're given
Knowing or feeling
That's the price we pay
Why do we live this way?
I'm skating by on Lost endeavors
Clinging to fictitious hope
Letting go seems far too simple
Yet my screaming mind won't
Fated for the greatest treasure
Far too real in my mind's eye
Breaking walls and Building people
For the far-set day in white
On the door-step
In cool showers
Hearts lay open
Fate will Seal
Serene frustration floats within me
Loving, giving no such joys
Mazes of obscure reactions
Hold their captives bleach-white bones
This is my life's endeavor
This is my Only prayer
Please tell me what you think
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amazing use of language x good all rounder x very gd hehe x x x x
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different. interesting. all in all a good job with writing this. enjoyed the read. keep up the writing.....
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TUTTA-BELLA
This just hit my mind like a Tidal wave from the
TITANIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lo)amo
Fated for the greatest treasure
Far too real in my mind's eye
Breaking walls and Building people
For the far-set day in white
On the door-step
In cool showers
Hearts lay open
Fate will Seal
Serene frustration floats within me
Loving, giving no such joys
Mazes of obscure reactions
Hold their captives bleach-white bones
This is my life's endeavor
This is my Only prayer GOD will answer your prayers and SAN ANTONIO I will pray to GOD and SAN ANTONIO to answer your prayers!!!!!!!!!!! SALUTE!!!!!!!!!!! -
"Swimming and singing
Dancing and running
Feeling but dying
Stopping to Live"
These are the most beautiful lines of this piece.
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It’s often hard to capture images so sharp and so vibrant that they actually paint a portrait for the reader to glimpse upon and savor at length, but you have certainly done that here. Don’t let the ink of your pen run dry!
♥ Touchof1der
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well this was a good poem, i enjoyed it!! you are so true, life never is easy, although we wuld like it to be it isn't. this was a easy read it flowed well and was wonderfully written,i hope you keep writing, well done well wishes, seltz
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Wonderfully reflective and thought provoking ,life is indeed not as simple as we would like it to be ,but if it were would we find it interesting enough ? We can dwell on the past and make light of the futuer but we only ever really live for the present
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Sad poem...but alot of it so true...some are words of depression...releasing of feelings...but life can be like this if you vocus only on these points...thanks for sharing
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Interesting piece to be certain, nice flow to it and wonderful omagery. Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e
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