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Not again

I just don't understand
one more failure
add it to the list
things for me never seem to work out
sitting in my chair, i look around
to the rotting food that surrounds
plates stack high
there is not enough energy
to clean the nasty piles
life is lonely, worthless, sad
i wish i could motivate
myself to get up
and simply take a bath.
Many years dragged by
before i knew it
my hopelessness consumed
keeping me from life, and life from me
Till I found a loving wife
who helped me see
medication is what i need
to feel a little happy
There is not bliss
but i have found
I no longer hate life
And it doesn't despise me

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  • Confetti Fairy-x
    May 7, 2007
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    i know what you're talking about, but its not poetic is it?

    it was alright...
    but not what i am looking for at all.
    i am gonna remove it, if you need more reasons why i have then ask, but im getting so tired of writing the same things on all the poems in this contest.
    thanks for entering.