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♥Serenidad♥

Mientras el dia se desvanece hacia la noche,

El brillo de la luna aparece,

Usted me traes serenidad,

y un fuego de amor

 

Mi alma te pertenece,

Para usted eres mi vida.

Tu corazon es mi hogar;

Hasta el fin de los tiempos.

 

Felicidad es todo lo que siento,

Gracias a ti.

La calentura fluye en mi venas,

La cual solo puedes darme.

 

Gracias para tu corazon
Yo prometo mi amor eterno.

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Te amo, tanto, mi bella esposa. ♥

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  • CarCrashHumor
    June 15, 2008
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    beautiful poem!
    I loved it


  • LaPoetaSinLimites
    May 20, 2008
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    que bueno, que romantico, me encanta


  • love my jose luis
    February 13, 2008

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    MUCHAS GRACIAS!!!! Yo amo poemas en Espanol!!!! Thank you so much for your entry in my contest... I was about to give up hope that anyone would enter a Spanish poem. Thank you so much! Good luck in my contest.
    ~Maria


  • Tseng Yu Nung
    July 7, 2007

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    Has escrito un poema tan encantador. Me gusta la idea que un corazon podria ser un hogar. :-) Muy original! Goce este poema sencillo, pero sincero.

  • Joancito
    July 7, 2007

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    Amazing

    Me gusta tu manera de escribir, puedo sentir lo que quieres expresar , eres una gran escritora, good work because some times is dificult share our feelings.
    Good Luck.


  • Never Fall in Love
    April 29, 2007

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    y un fuego de amor

     

    That's my favourite part

    Although, I grasped not much of this poem

    I can tell that it is very beautiful

    Especially because of the first two lines

    and the person who wrote this

    it's really good

     

    *hug*


  • vitamin.M
    April 29, 2007

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    very sweet!
    my spanish is basic, so i only got the jist of it, but is is very very nice and has great flow...

  • violetzombie
    April 28, 2007
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    This was so beautiful. I can see that you have feelings for a certain someone, maybe Very nice job.


  • autumns rising
    April 26, 2007
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    it sux i cant understand this, bet its beautiful though lol

  • MxA
    April 25, 2007

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    Mi bella esposa este poema es tan precioso, y divino como usted. Te amo tanto, la itenidad no puede contener' el amor que yo siento por usted. Usted brilla' mas que la luna su sonsrisa contiene mas luz que el sol. Te prometo mi alma, mi cuerpo, mi vida, por siempre, mis lagrimas son de felicidad, muchas gracias por darme la sonrisa mas grande del mundo. Por siempre usted y yo mi angel Te amo tanto, tanto, tanto!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • StarEyes
    April 24, 2007

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    Hey darling,

    I have no idea what this says, I can't read it, . I am sure however that it is great!!

    Loves ya

    Mom

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