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Warm Hearted Geisha 15

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Lovely smiles
Outstanding personality
Romantic dreams
Independent
Soft spoken and
Softhearted
All time wonderful girl!

 

 

 

 

 

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  • dustookie2
    January 23

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    Hood Winked!!

    i do admire the artfulness of the geisha....they, like your poem, reflected artistic talent and grace. It is an acrostic beautifully penned. This shows how a few words can paint the picture delicately. Very nicely crafted*rose


  • imperfectperfection
    May 12, 2007

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    Outstanding

    Yes! that is my little angel, my baby, of course like mother like daughter lol as always Deb you pick teh perfect words for a perfect fit for the person you write about... you are not only great poet, my dear, the choice of your words also show you have a beautiful heart that has wings to take the entire world out of this world... far in the paradise... of course I can see this as a winner, one because it's about my daughter & then it does total justification to her... thank you for capturing my baby's spirit in your poem... take care Minoo


  • Rose Angel gold member
    May 11, 2007

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    Yep, and she is my niece...and I am so proud of her...So talented...Thanks sis for honoring her! I always give her compliments, but with my big family, haven;t done what you have, and also without you, as my sister, Geisha would not be as wonderful as she is....that support, love and prayers helps too...as i do as well..but us two together.....and her we make a team!


  • Candy6
    May 9, 2007
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    excellent


  • Red Rose of Light
    April 30, 2007
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    very sweet good job


  • pattyann4500
    April 25, 2007

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    This is lovely. Your words are so special. She's fortunate to have you as a friend. Hugs, Patricia

  • goalsv
    April 25, 2007
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    Veryy good! Don't know much about geisha but seems like a good discription!


  • Frozentearz
    April 25, 2007

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    What a lovely Acrostic you have penned sure to touch the one it is written for,
    I enjoyed your beautiful description of words.
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • soulfultia gold member
    April 25, 2007

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    Another beautiful tribute from you, a gift of your spirit passed on to her. You are a lovely poet and friend, this was a sweet gesture and my pleasure to read ~Tia


  • DJ Harley silver member
    April 24, 2007

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    what a lovely poem for Lorissa, i know she will love it.
    good luck int he contest deb

    John


  • Samplette gold member
    April 24, 2007

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    A wonderfully written acrotic. You give encouraging and an uplifting hug with your words. Very nice. I wish you the best in the contest.
    Sam


  • paullallady silver member
    April 24, 2007

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    Another wonderful tribute to a dear friend of yours. Your ability to put the essence and wonderful qualities of each one of these true poets.


  • Ephiphany
    April 24, 2007
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    Beautiful Name...

    What a wonderful write...very Lovely
    Ephiphany


  • WarmHeartedGeisha
    April 24, 2007
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    Its very sweet ^_^ and wonderfully written.

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