Freak is me can't you see?
I,m on a leash set me free
I have a collar that's green and shiny
My dog is big and his name is Tiny
My hair is black with green stripes
My mom told me to change it, she always gripes
My best friend is a girl named Daisy
She is really kinda crazy
Her dad is a trucker, her mom is a teacher
Her brother is an unusual creature
He lives in the woods behind her house
His best friend is a ten foot mouse
We get together and have parties
We always like to eat smarties
Author notes
"I'm not a piece of property, I'm not just a kid.
A contest entry
- Options!!! by A Poet Named Kyoto.
1050 points, ended August 4, 2007, 37 entries
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Bronze trophy winner
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Please tell me what you think
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haha, this is great, for a rap of some sort.
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i love this piece eventhough its short i love the flow its quite amazing thanks for entering my very first contest and best of luck.
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I think this is a fantastic little piece, I loved it.
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This poem...is definitely not what I was looking for. Unemotional. It just seemed like a bunch of nonesense. Thanks for your entry though!
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Sorry but no quote, no option number, no prize. i'm sorry because i thought this write was interesting. -
this was one of the most interesting writes i've ever read. i would be daisy in this piece and my friend would probably be the narrator, so I can appreciate this piece. Good job, good luck and thanks for entering
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This is peculiar. Very very peculiar, but me likey!
Thankyou for entering and good luck in my c0otnest.
Katie -
Nicely written piece
Thanks so much for participating in my contest. I wish you all the best. I encourage you to keep on writing my friend.
>>>VIRGOAN -
wow, awsome, i love the rime sceem! verry talented your are lol good luck in the contest
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Very good Anthony. Speaking up for yourself loud and clear; that's the way to do it. Thanks for entering, buddy.
Good luck.
Brian -
This is an interesting piece, definatly liking nothing i've read before, but it seems unresolved, as if it needs an ending.
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Lol, this is cute. Its kinda random but it all goes together too. Great imaginary kid. You did a exellent job!
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Lol, this is cute. Its kinda random but it all goes together too. Great imaginary kid. You did a exellent job!
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this was previously judged by a judge (BabyFox) but it said it wasn't viewed by a judge so sorry about the misunderstanding you might have had and this is a great poem ^-^
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very good poem my dear i am not sure but i think that Kids Kontests couldn't think of a topic for this contest
well thanx for entering dear...good luck...and keep up the great work my dear...
~♥ BabyFox~ -
Great
I have a boy not much younger than you,I like your vivid imagination
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