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Silly Rhyme

My brother has a cat named Lilly
and she is very silly her favorite
food is chili and she plays with
a dog named Millie and they're going
to Philly they are both very silly.

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  • poets whisper silver member
    January 26
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    cute and silly the rhyme is so willy nilly


  • sweetdancer
    October 8, 2007

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    cute rhyming words!my favorite sentence from this poem is where you said she plays with a dog named millie!great job!

    sincerely,
    sweetdancer (yasmine)


  • thelordreigns gold member
    August 15, 2007

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    Another very cute poem!

    Thanks for this second entry too!

    - joanne

  • Breelynn
    June 3, 2007

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    cute rhyme

    You did a very good job at rhyming all your 'illys'. Lilly is a very unique cat indeed.
    Eating chili, playing with dogs, and traveling all the way to Philly?

    That silly Lilly, I think I like her already.
    Thanks for your entry.

    Check your spelling (especially the title)
    *****
    Rhyme
    chili

  • ashley1
    May 8, 2007
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    ya kool


  • Miss Sweet Kisses
    May 7, 2007
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    aww

    Hehehe. Adorable sweetie! Loved! ♥

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 24, 2007

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    Cute poem. Nicely done.
    Lilly and Millie sound like nice pets.

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