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Wilhelmina

Wilhelmina, a gal extraordinaire
In everything  she does, there's poise and there's flair
Loving and passionate, intelligent and quick
Her hilarious poetry is always slick
Each of her books makes a right 'cwazy wead'
Laughter throughout; rubber chickens to breed
Mistress of all that is good, kind and true
Inherently honest she'll be there for you
Never will she let you down as a friend
Always stand by you, to the very last end

Astonishing lady, but nobody's fool

Sensual, beautiful, sexy and cool
A poet, photographer, songstress and wit
Looks of a film star, with figure to fit
Vibrant and sparkling, her smiles melt my knees
A woman I'd give a million to squeeze
The bestest of rhymers I've read on god's earth
Openly sharing her humour and mirth
Raising our spirits with quick witty rhymes
Ensuring our laughter flows time after time...

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

A special tribute to my very dear friend, Galfalfa.

Who BTW is also extremely talented.

The background is another of her creations.

Thanks G

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  • moonling
    February 8, 2008

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    Well-written as always and very sweet, Bob, galfalfa is a very lucky lady to have something this wicked written for her.


  • Kappa Pyua
    September 5, 2007

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    repeat

    Like I said on your main page this poem is awsome, looks very complicated for me, but looks like it came too you with ease Good Job UNT.


  • Melodies
    May 20, 2007

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    Happy to be here!

    This honored poet you have written about is a lovely person... and you have written a beautiful poem! Makes me glad and I am sure she loves this write.


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    April 26, 2007
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    Hood-Wink!

    A beautiful tribute to a lady you think a lot about, she sounds as though she has a lot of beautiful qualities...

    Impressive Acrostic, at first I never saw it, your imagery, word flow and rhyme are exquisite

    You have been Hood-Winked by a member of The Poetic Bandits

    Love and smiles...
    ~Lilac


  • Lady-Pegasus
    April 26, 2007
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    Oh what a wonderful and witty poem, the flowing and rhyme are wonderful with a quick, lively tempo that greatly compliments this piece. The background is wonderfully adorable! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *

    YOU HAVE JUST BEEN HOODWINKED ; Courtesy of the Poetic Bandits


  • rufina caraid gold member
    April 25, 2007

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    I couldn't agree more except for the squeezing bit
    Gal is one in a million, everything you say is totally true. beautifully penned Bob to a very special friend of both yours and mine.

    Von


  • Bazza
    April 24, 2007

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    A Good sort eh ??

    An incredible tribute to such a wel known and respected poet. I love the flow and rhyme and the happy (but sensuous) secnd half .. I always miss the good bits ..lol
    Barry


  • Nature Song silver member
    April 24, 2007

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    WD, wonderful tribute to your friend. As always yoru wording is spectaculiar! And above all very heartfelt in this dedication! ~Sie


  • galfalfa gold member
    April 24, 2007

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    Awww, this is such a wonderful, fabulous acrostic and being read whilst wearing the WelshDragon t'shirt you sent me and "Cwtsh" sitting here beside my computer monitor with a huge grin on his face
    Thank you so much dear heart for this very special gift!

    I love this and adore you for being so thoughtful and sweet!

    galfalfa


    • WelshDragon
      April 25, 2007

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      Thanks G.... You have me blushing
      Thoroughly enjoyed penning it for you.
      WD

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