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Fragment of the mirror

Ribbon and lace,
Soft and stable,
Scattered on your
Bedside table.

Silk and velvet,
Strong and sure,
Lying on your
Bedroom floor.

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  • Tconi
    April 30, 2007
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    good

    it has a nice flow to it and a fast paced read that makes it... given your words slightly erotic


  • Vicky Shwepps
    April 26, 2007
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    i love it!! i catually love it, its so simple yet it screams romance! lol xxxxxxxx


  • Freedom comes
    April 26, 2007

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    ahhhh yes! This is a pretty little poem, I can see the image so clearly in my head! It's so simple, it's great. well done xxx