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Where Is The Musician That Plays My Love Song

the words are written the notes are there
but where is the musician to play the music with loving care
My heart longs to dance to the rhythmic beat

My feet know the steps, my heart knows the pace
I just long for the music to start,to take place
The melody is so sweet and beautiful to an empty ear
I long to hear it so crystal clear

Where is the musician that plays my love song
The one who has magical hands that last all night long
with long slim fingers that glide across the heartfelt keys
such sweet sounds could bring an angel to their knees

But there is no sound not a single tune is to be heard
There is no music for this blue bird
My hearts lost and longing for the music to my lovers song
I know the words and notes but with music they belong

The words were written a long time ago
the notes were carefully placed upon the weathered
paper they show
My feet long to dance to the beat for the rest of eternity
oh where is the musician that plays my love songs melody

Author notes

I'm lucky enough to have found my musician
that plays our love song
the music is exquisite, the sound so profound
I'm thankful each day that my musician I have found
For my wonderful husband Chris, who always knows the music to my heart the words to sing to my soul and the steps to dance to sweep me off my feet.
Loving you always and forever,Your Wife

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  • zaboo-mafu
    April 30, 2007

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    wow!!!

    very unique! refreshing. u have such ease with words. this piece flows like a love song. uve done great once again. it is so romantic in so many levels. keep on writing....


    ~marcus


  • Decorus Somnium
    April 26, 2007

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    Oh wow. This is such a romantic poem which I simply love it. It's something different and deffinately something very good!
    Keep writing and God Bless


  • Vampyric Rogue
    April 26, 2007

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    beauiful.. and now i am jealous

    Wonderful poem. You are right, music is the key and the heartbeat. If someone can play the right tune, and keep you happy, then you have found it. lucky for you, that tune has been played and continues to play. I hope it nevers finds the ending of the sheet.


    • poetry within
      April 26, 2007
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      What a sweet comment Thank you for reading my work I appreciate the feedback. I hope your days are getting easier.
      and again thank you


  • ImJay
    April 25, 2007

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    GREAT ANALOGY

    I really liked this poem, music is a gateway to everyones heart and can absolutely be the way to ANYONES heart. I am glad to hear that you found your musician...Great poem, couldnt stop reading it if I wantd to. Best wishes and keep writing.


  • ckwriter69
    April 24, 2007

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    Very nice write and cleverly written. A wonderful poem of affection for your husband, who knows what music you like best. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.


  • Desire gold member
    April 24, 2007

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    Aaaaaaaw Dangggggg!!

    Precious verse Penned my Friend
    Love this piece~
    Can feel the Love You share
    Beautifully weaved~ Priceless

    Thank You for sharing this!

    Many blessings to You!
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

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