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As I Stand and Wait

As I stand here and wait
The wind beats as it tries to take me down
It push it shoves
With such great streangth
Where there are times i would like to give up
Yet i stand my ground as I wait
Because you are my love

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    April 25, 2007

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    Alliteration would really move this poem into more of a sensory adventure....I love that you stand your ground...that is a great phrase to go with this.