I tried so many times,
To love you like you wanted me.
I tried so many times to take you by the hand.
I wanted so much to tell you I loved you
I needed you.
There’s only one girl that I could ever love.
It killed me when you said I love you
It killed me when you went away.
Theres times I though I could
And times I knew I couldn’t go.
But all things go to as we must.
We parted on the tear soaked air
And we parted in the sand.
I took your hand that last time
And held it for a lifetime.
When you have something that you have in your life
You get used to it care for it love it.
Then its gone and your left with ghosts.
I have the ghost of her
It whispers memories and cries of our pain and happiness.
Im sorry.
But I cant love you.
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Wow this is so deep i love it great emotions and everything its so AWESOME hmmmm so sad not to be able to love a girl who loves you in the same way but what can you do when you don't like them in that way leading them on would be harsh
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this is great bear! the pain and hurt is beautifully written and expressed in the poem, i can feel it, its so tangible! great write! keep it up!
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wow i say i love it really sad but i can feel some hurt in your words thats really lovely i like pain but i like to share my pain do you share your pain with any one maybe i could be that some one i have no one to talk to about my life and mybe just maybe you could tell me about yours but until then by sexy kissy kissy
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This breaks my heart every time I read it, I really think I should stop. Of course I'm rather jealous of it.
*sighs and sniffles* It's still as excellent as the day you wrote it, it hasn't, and at least for me, will never lose it's potency
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This breaks my heart every time I read it, I really should stop. But of course I'm rather jealous of it. *sighs and sniffles* It's still as wonderful as the first time I read it though, it doesn't lose it's potency
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wow... i totally get it. i like the feeling of being in love but its bad when you break up. then you feel as though the pian will never fade, the tears will naver stop, the hole within your heart will never be filled. but think for a moment... is it because you can't love another, or because you refuse to? open your heart to the sun and let the scars melt away... love will fill the creveses within. you will live on.
good job bear, this has inspired me greatly and will likely the rest of all poetry. thank you for being you.
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Magnificent
Your words have always captivated me. But this leaves me in awe. I love this write!
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Breath taking
Wow hunni this was breathe taking, it kept my attention all the way through and gave me pictures in my head of the words you wrote. iloved it. well written. xx
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Wow. "I have the ghost of her"...how sad, but yet you still can't love them. Oh this hits to close to home except I'm on the other end of the spectrum... Good poem, but so sad. What's the story behind this?
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*is crying horribly now, and wishes she could make everything all better* *sniffles and giggles* Now I have more ghosts to contend with
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