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staring at a blank sheet of paper

Staring...  staring...  blinding white,
my dog took me for a walk last night,
then he had a fight with a tree...
now let me see...  what can I write?

There was an oyster that lived in a broken home,
well, actually it was a broken shell,
his best friend was Yengin the gnome,
I wish I knew how to spell!

Antidisestablishmentarianism,
hurly-burly, cherrish, anachronism,
cross out the wrong word and rewrite it once more,
my teacher's in despair, she's rolling on the floor.

And, lastly, therefore I must conclude,
that my poetry style, as yet, is profoundly crude,
it has no meaning or fucus, and I won't give an example,
staring at a blank sheet of paper...  the space left is ample!

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 27, 2007

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    LOL, this is great! Wonderfully written, with a touch of humor and truth. We have all had the moments where stare is all we can do.
    Nice fun write.
    Best to you!


  • CarolinaSkillet
    April 24, 2007
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    ...I like this. It's strangely endearing

    Keep writing xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

    CR