windblown wonder daylight shone
tiny frame leaning toward the blast
threaten to take the lass in flight
her expression bland and forlorn
seeking an unmistakable relief
she stands hopeless and abandoned
anguish tears her soul apart
whipping now around her head
the wind will steal her life
anguish in this daylight shone
seeking an unmistakable relief
steadfast now she stands
to the distress she won’t give in
silently she will wait
standing hopeless and abandoned
awesome wind in daylight shone
destroying thoughts of hope
In a list
A contest entry
- A Wait In The Wind - One Day Contest by CarolDesjarlais.
600 points, ended April 25, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ROUND 1 Contest ~ Anything goes ~ Points in final round 1950! by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended July 20, 2007, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You know, I really like this~ it moves me~ Wow~ Thanks for entering! Good luck in the contest~ Nice job.
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the hiss of wind fits great in this poem, ty so much for entering...
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A great write. Wonderful imagery and word choice. Easy flow and rhythm. Nice rhyme. I wish you the best in the contest.
Sam
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