March winds maundering mercilessly,
whipping around items not tied down.
Flailing fragments of forlorn leaves
soaring on the unseen windstorm.
Grasping gapping garments caught on the gale,
to keep them from blowing away.
Braced against brutal blasts to maintain balance,
to prevent being blow away.
March winds winding down wearily,
at the approach of April and Spring.
Author notes
I hope this is okay. I thought I would give it a try!
Boreas-Giclee-Print-
A contest entry
- A Wait In The Wind - One Day Contest by CarolDesjarlais.
600 points, ended April 25, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a wonderful write
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Wonderful write. I can feel the wind whipping around...must be that I come from the windy city. You have done a wonderful job here. Best of luck to you as always. Dawn
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Nice altieration...the whip and wind and weave of wind is felt, heard, in this great piece....
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it is a lovely poem we are getting some very high winds and I live in tornado ally, it is very windy right now 50 + mph winds, tornados in texas. i went out the back yard and almost got blown away.
good luck in the contest sis.
much love
Your brother John
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Wow that is strong!! Think I'll stay in England!! Thanks for your support! I appreciate it.
Jeannie
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Wow!
Love this piece my Friend and the Image You got Inspiration from~
Beautifully penned!!
Wonderful alliteration too
Best wishes to You in the contest!
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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brill i love it ...good luck in the contest xxx cheeky xxx
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Beautiful
Well written and word choice is lovely. Flow beautiful. Great Job.
*Go with God* my friend,
Valerie
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Nice alliteration that compliments this blustery piece (bad pun sorry, it is meant nicely hehe) and it's picture quite well, my friend. Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *
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